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Directions: Suppose the student union of your university is organizing an online discussion on college students doing community service. You are to write an essay on its benefits and the service you can provide to the community. You will have 30 minutes for the task. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
On College Students Doing Community Service
①簡單句College student volunteers are important resources for community service. ②簡單句It is of great significance to strengthen college students' participation in community service.
③簡單句Doing community service is beneficial to both the community and college students themselves. ④復合句When it comes to our students, process of service helps us develop social practical skills, like the leadership, communication, and collaboration, which would enable us to go further in future life. ⑤簡單句In terms of community, its service level and quality can be greatly improved. ⑥簡單句As a student majoring in law, I would share knowledge about law in an understandable way with community members. ⑦復合句Besides, there are many senior citizens who may need help with household chores, grocery shopping, or just want someone to talk to in the community. ⑧復合句By volunteering our time and offering assistance, we can show them that they are not alone and bring joy to their lives.
⑨簡單句Overall, there are countless ways for college students to provide volunteer service to the community. ⑩復合句Volunteering not only benefits the individuals we are helping but also provides us with an opportunity to develop valuable skills. 11 簡單句Therefore, I call on more of my fellow students to commit ourselves to community service.
1開篇點題,突出大學生參與社區的重要性
2總述本段內容
3通過When it comes to指出參與社區服務對大學生的意義。
4通過In terms of指出參與社區服務對社區的意義。
5指出自己利用所學專業能夠為社區提供的服務。
6利用Besides提出能夠為社區老人提供的服務。
7使用Overall總結全文內容。
8呼吁更多同學參與社區服務。
Part One 生詞好句
1.call for 呼吁 tap one's potential 挖掘某人的潛能；ethical 道德的，倫理的 ；
2.invigorate one's passion for... 激發某人對.......的熱情；
3.support group 支持小組； cultivate a sense of dedication 培養奉獻意識；
4.be committed to 致力于， commit oneself to 致力于，投身于 ；
care for “empty-nest”seniors 照顧“空巢”老人；
5.time management 時間管理；provide services based on expertise 基于專業知識提供服務；feed stray animals 喂養流浪動物
6.enable, --使能夠；使有機會
The software enables you to access the Internet in seconds.
這種軟件使你在幾秒鐘內便可訪問互聯網。
--使成為可能；使可行；使實現
Insulin enables the body to use and store sugar.
胰島素使人體能夠利用和貯存糖分。
Part Two 語篇分析
四級作文一般有8個句子左右。
第1段Introduction（導入），開篇點題：突出大學生參與社區服務的重要性。
第2段, Body（正文）,具體論證：大學生參與社區服務的意義以及具體的服務內容。
第3段Conclusion（結論）結尾：總結全文并呼吁更多的大學生參與到社區服務中去。
1.Introduction, 第一段2個簡單句，注意It is of great importance to…….形式主語結構。
2.Body, 第二段是正文：3個復合句，2個簡單句。
③簡單句Doing community service is……動名詞短語Doing community service做主語，④復合句When it comes to ……..process of service helps us develop social practical skills(主句), like the leadership, communication, and collaboration（平行結構）, which would enable us to……. ⑤簡單句In terms of community, its service level and quality can be greatly improved. ⑥簡單句As a student majoring in law, I would share knowledge about law in an understandable way with community members. ⑦復合句Besides, there are many senior citizens（主句） who may need help with household chores, grocery shopping, or just want someone to talk to in the community. ⑧復合句By volunteering our time and offering assistance, we can show them（主句） that they are not alone and bring joy to their lives.
3.Conclusion 2個簡單句，一個復合句，注意第二句，not only.....but also 連接2個并列謂語，帶出一個省去引導詞that的定語從句we are helping，⑨簡單句Overall, there are countless ways for college students to provide ...... ⑩復合句Volunteering not only benefits the individuals we are helping but also provides us with an opportunity to.......
11 簡單句Therefore, I call on more of my fellow students to commit ourselves to community service.
Part Three 寫作或翻譯時，注意英語“形合”，漢語“意合”的思維特點。
1.英語表達注重“形合”，以形顯意，句子結構嚴謹，主謂長句居多。
2.熟悉英語基礎語法，時態，各種從句，倒轉句，習慣搭配，通過詞匯，語法手段的顯性銜接，把松散漢語思維轉化成邏輯緊湊，但缺乏彈性的語篇整體。
4.漢語重“意合”，以意馭形，句子結構松散，但“形散神不散”。
5.漢翻英時，漢語原句的主謂未必就是英語的主謂結構，影響英語理解時，要適當調整。
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